'She noticed that Danneskjold was studying Galt's face, as if he, too, found the incident inexplicable. Galt held his glance, deliberately and openly, as if challenging him to find the explanation and promising that he would fail. She knew that Danneskjold had failed, when she saw a faint crease of humour softening Galt's eyelids.'I've gone for the look with the faint crease of humour here, but it should still incorporate the challenging and promising holding of Danneskjold's glance as well.
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